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What’s With All The Talk About Structure?

SCEW - WordPress embedded icon - glass lookIt’s everywhere. The snowflake method. The Wordplay lady. Moi. Probably a few other places.

Why are people talking about structure all of a sudden?

Does a story even need it? Or maybe it’s just for genre writers. Besides, isn’t that like putting shackles on a running thoroughbred? Especially literary writers?

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Structure? No thank you. I’m an artiste. I wing it.

Whoa there, back up. Please don’t mistake structure for some dictatorial pre-fab format. Structure is to story what bones are to flesh. It’s there, whether you consciously create it or not. Writing without structure is like walking without bones. If you’re lucky – and most of us are not – you have a knack for intuiting structure from within the writing process. Like a boss. Bravo.

However

It’s a bit like raising children: if you don’t teach them values, someone else will.

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Like this guy. He will teach em up real good.

If writers don’t consciously deal with structure, the reader will. And while s/he might not be actively aware of what the problem is, the story will simply not sit right. If you troll the comments sections of your local online book emporium, notice how often you read assessments like “a mess”, “went nowhere”, “had no point”, “all over the map” “fell apart” “pointless” or “doesn’t know what it wants to be”.

But, you may argue, that’s just bad plotting. Or there’s probably no theme tying it together.

Oh, pookie. These are not plot issues. They’re not thematic problems. They’re structural.

How do I know?

Theme is, say, a massive glass skyscraper in the heart of Kabul, or a cookie cutter neighborhood. If a building is ugly, it’s a design issue. If it falls down? Structural. If there are cracks in the walls, crumbling? Structure. Warping or listing? Structure. Accretions? Structure. Seepage? Structure.

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My house. See? I know what I’m talking about. That’s 360-degree structural issues right there.

The qualities of structural soundness apply whether you’re knee deep in basement sewage (and have miraculously found no Hot Wheels stuffed in the toilet) or wrist-deep in narrative sewage.

Take a look at this:

Theme = what your story is about. A glass skyscraper in Kabul says something (intentionally – we’ll get you on your feet economically, or perceptually – we’ve been colonized). A cookie cutter neighborhood says something. Theme is either directed or interpreted, and not necessarily the same way.

Ugly story = unappealing, distasteful, unfamiliar style, voice, form. And ugly can be beautiful: As I Lay Dying.

Collapsed story (ie: a mess or fell apart) = failed structure

Cracks in the narrative (ie: pointless, makes no sense) = unsound structure

Warping/listing story (ie: all over the map, bad beginning, weak middle, fell apart at the end) = weak or poorly constructed structure

Accretions in the story (ie: stuck, all build-up/no follow-through) = compromised structure

Seepage (ie: doesn’t know what it wants to be) = breached structure

You can be a fantastic writer but a bad storyteller, and you won’t have an audience. You can be a terrible writer but with amazing storytelling skills and end up a millionaire.

Structure is everything. Storytelling stands on its foundation. Genius and talent and great ideas are nothing without the substance of structure.

That’s what the big deal is about structure. That’s what all the talk is about.

Unfortunately, it’s also the hardest part to get right. So someone’s telling you to use fractals to set up your story. Start with generalities and work your way toward specifics. It’s a nice idea but how does that help you with your story, now – right now? How do fractals create the dramatic momentum required to tell a good story?

Someone else out there wants you to write summaries and tack them all together with scene-building. What does that have to do with structure, or momentum, or internal logic?

Three acts? Five? Does it matter?

Did you tell a good story after all those exercises? Can you even tell?

Now what? How do you test out whether your story will be a good one? Shouldn’t there be some way to examine the components to see if it has created a structure strong enough for good storytelling?

Mapping? Storyboarding? They might be good for idea generation but how are blind guide methods going to help writers structure? Keep reading all the self-help type books but it’s like reading about building houses. If you want to actually learn how to build a house you have to build a house. That’s when all the weird words and actions take on meaning. Real meaning.

So build your structure.

Over the next few months readers of this blog will learn about the only structuring tool available anywhere that can truly help: read my post on the Writer’s Studio Series:Structural Flowchart (Classic Arc Narrative). Learn how to structure by structuring your story. This is something different. Right now every other method out there is like trying to make sense of a film by looking at one photo at a time. The Structural Flowchart is your whole story. All at once. Right in front of your eyes so you’ll know instantly when something isn’t working, and how it affects other parts of the structure.

Let that bake your noodle for a while.

If you want to tell better stories, if you want to increase your chances of having readers and getting published and doing well, you will need this tool. Subscribe to my blog (rather than merely “like” the post) for updates about when the Structural Flowchart will be available. I’ll continue teaching readers about what exactly this thing is so that by the time it launches on Kickstarter, my blog subscribers will not only know what it is, they’ll also be among the first in the world to get a hold of it. Kickstarter is an all-or-nothing proposition, so please tell anyone you know with an interest in writing to come to this blog, subscribe, and be part of something that will change the way stories are built.

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Why Everything You’ve Ever Done To Keep Track Of Your Story Is Wrong

SCEW - WordPress embedded icon - glass lookGuidebooks: Blahblah blah. Blah blah. Blah. Huh? Interesting. But how was that supposed to help me actually write – ?

Workbooks: Scribble scribblescribble scratch. Erase-erase-erase. Scribble. Scribble. Who the – What the – Why’d I write that? And why did I put it there in the first place? Erase erase erase. Scribble. Rip. Dayum

Software: Tappity-tappity tap tap tappatappa. Tap. Delete delete. Tappity tap. Backspacebackspacebackspace. Tap. Delete delete delete. Tappity – Hmm. Where’d I put that part about the atheist praying mantis? Tap tap – Where did – Ah! Oh. Ugh. Delete delete delete. Wait – maybe I need it after all. No, it’s gone. But – maybe it really is important to the story. But then – Aw, I don’t even know any more. Click. P-khew!

Files & Notes: Aaargh! Sob –

Structural Flowchart* – Write write write. Oh! So that’s how that works! Wow. Just – wow. Write write. Oh, so that’s not supposed to be there. Correct. Track track – yes, now it makes sense why it didn’t work. It doesn’t link up with any of the other narrative threads. Ha. Lee. Loo. Ya.

Nuff said.

* Coming soon to a Kickstarter near you: the Writer’s Studio Series: Structural Flowchart (Classic Arc Narrative). Tell your friends. If you (and all those friends who are dying to write better stories) want to be updated about the progress of the project launch, please subscribe to this blog.

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A Revolutionary New Storytelling Tool Is Coming

SCEW - WordPress embedded icon - glass lookThis will change the way you write.

If you can imagine what blueprints and the fundamentals of structural engineering did for architecture, or what arrangement principles and scoring sheets did for composers, you have an idea what this tool will do for writers. It’s the perfect marriage of form and function, and there is nothing like it anywhere in the world. Anywhere.

The Writer’s Studio Series Structural Flowchart (Classic Arc Narrative) is not a guidebook, it’s not a workbook, and it’s not cumbersome, overly-complicated software. It’s so unbelievably simple that writers will wonder how it hasn’t already existed yet.

It will shave years of frustrated effort off your writing.

It. Will. Change. Your. Life.

What is it?

Stay tuned.

Soon I will be launching a Kickstarter campaign for this project, which will allow backers the chance to get hold of a hot-off-the-press copy long before it’s available to the general public.

But here’s where it gets amazing: without naming names (because I haven’t secured permission to name-drop yet, but you know which one I’m talking about), the biggest media venue in the world dedicated to writers wants a first-run copy of this product to assess for a possible feature article aimed at its global audience of writers and publishers. That means, after the Kickstarter campaign, if demand goes supernova, copies will be hard to get hold of for a while as I scramble with my supplier to manage the upped game.

This is where it gets ugly. Kickstarter is all-or-nothing. If a project doesn’t meet its goal, not one dollar changes hands. So, if writers want this amazing tool in their hot little hands, this thing has to go viral. That means every person reading this blog post who wants a copy of the Classic Arc Narrative Structural Flowchart will have to tell everyone, and ask them to tell everyone.

Subscribe to this blog for updates and clues, and be among the first to become a backer.

It’s okay to “like” the post, but this will not get you any updates, so if you want to stay informed about the progress of the project and the Kickstarter campaign, you must subscribe (along the side bar). The project launch will go hand-in-hand with the launch of a dedicated website. Once the Kickstarter campaign begins, there will only be 30 days to take action.

No one can imagine designing a building without blueprints, or composing a symphony without a score. It’s time writers were given the same advantage. The Writer’s Studio Series Classic Arc Narrative Structural Flowchart is the best possible tool available for structuring fiction. Find out for yourself what architects and composers have known for centuries.

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